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	<title>Comments on: First Draft Problem #29, by NeensZ</title>
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		<title>By: NeensZ</title>
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		<dc:creator>NeensZ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jan 2010 10:00:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks!</description>
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		<title>By: Hauckston</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hauckston</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jan 2010 01:32:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Plot holes are deafening. Great video.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Plot holes are deafening. Great video.</p>
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		<title>By: Dawn Hall</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dawn Hall</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Nov 2009 02:52:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nothing worse than plot holes!  Well...POT holes are worse!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nothing worse than plot holes!  Well&#8230;POT holes are worse!</p>
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		<title>By: NeensZ</title>
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		<dc:creator>NeensZ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Oct 2009 01:18:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you so much for the compliment!  I have a husband obsessed with zombies; not only was it fairly easy to find pictures of the zombie apocalypse, but I get to be exposed to the gaping plot holes in almost every zombie story out there.  So if I have one pet peeve when it comes to writing, it&#039;s Problem #29 - and yet it is also the most common mistake I make myself!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you so much for the compliment!  I have a husband obsessed with zombies; not only was it fairly easy to find pictures of the zombie apocalypse, but I get to be exposed to the gaping plot holes in almost every zombie story out there.  So if I have one pet peeve when it comes to writing, it&#8217;s Problem #29 &#8211; and yet it is also the most common mistake I make myself!</p>
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		<title>By: Dyre</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dyre</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 05:30:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>No one has commented, so I worry if comments were discouraged somewhere and I missed it...

Ah well.

That was fantastic! 

Plot holes being one of the many First Draft mistakes, the silent film approach and the use of a zombie apocalypse.  

Who doesn&#039;t love zombies as subject matter? How fitting, as well, for them to be in a short video on plot holes.  

I certainly see why you are a finalist. I did not participate but wanted to see what others did. I am glad I did, that was entertaining.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>No one has commented, so I worry if comments were discouraged somewhere and I missed it&#8230;</p>
<p>Ah well.</p>
<p>That was fantastic! </p>
<p>Plot holes being one of the many First Draft mistakes, the silent film approach and the use of a zombie apocalypse.  </p>
<p>Who doesn&#8217;t love zombies as subject matter? How fitting, as well, for them to be in a short video on plot holes.  </p>
<p>I certainly see why you are a finalist. I did not participate but wanted to see what others did. I am glad I did, that was entertaining.</p>
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